Brush with death-one
Christmas when I was twelve brought many nice presents but
the BIG ONE was a three speed Schwinn, sleek and shiny, the best present ever!
After riding it for a week of vacation, I was more than ready for the first day
of school to show it off. My girlfriend
picked me up and we started out on the seven block ride. Her bike was old. I felt bad for her. She begged to trade bikes
just to try it out. After two blocks I switched with her. What a
difference! No smooth ride, no gears to
change, it was a rickety ride on a rusty old bike and I said, ‘Let’s switch
back at the next corner!’
“Okay”, was the last thing I heard
before the chain slipped and I was thrown off balance into the roadway. As the
bike and I came to rest on the asphalt I saw the tire of the car pass within four
inches of my head. It stopped and I was getting up when the lady got out of the
car. She was very pale, the blood
drained from her face in shock. “I thought I’d run over you,” she exclaimed.
“Are you all right?”
I managed to stand. “Fine”, I
replied. As she left, my friend said, “Oh, yeah, I was going to tell you, the
chain is slipping!”
I actually wasn’t fine. As I rode
to school on my new bike I noticed drops of blood on the frame. Then, I realized my knee was bleeding a lot.
At school, the nurse bandaged the ground meat that remained on my knee and I
went to class.
Around ten o’clock I was surprised to see my mother
come to the classroom. She had come to
school to register my brother, Roger, for kindergarten. She wanted to see my
knee. One look at the grayish old
hamburger where my knee used to be and off we went.
At the doctor’s office, after three
numbing shots, I spent a half hour behind a drape as the sound of gravel
hitting a metal pan rang through the office. I might have been a better patient
had they let me see what he was doing.
But, instead, I screamed bloody murder and I still have a bluish dark spot
over the location of one rock he didn’t remove.
The doctor
told my mother it was a good thing she brought me then as waiting until the
afternoon would have cost me my knee.
So, my little brother saved my knee!
Rocks in the knee, Ouch. Such a little spill and such a close call.
ReplyDeleteKeep dodging them, Sharon
Thanks Rosie...is it okay to the group that I just went ahead and wrote...All my life I have written in my head...usually essays in threes. My best three meals...best vacations, always in threes. Maybe I was writing your 'topics' all that time. In any case, I find myself reviewing my life at this time in it. I usually write for myself but I've enjoyed sharing with you folks....From past months I notice the group writings vary in number. I suppose I will be less inclined to write when it becomes less fascinating. But, I'm loving it now! My only concern is with acceptance from my fellow writers...of course! I don't want to be treading on accepted practices. Please let me know if these don't fit. and I'd love to see more from the others. I could read the older pieces but I feel removed from the immediacy of feedback and the issues have passed for you all. i'M LOOKING FOR GUIDANCE HERE.
ReplyDeleteYes, it is more than okay. It's super. Everyone writes whatever and whenever they feel like it.
DeleteI think the only wrong time to write or comment on writing, is when you don't really want to, but think you have to. Then it becomes a chore, I think.
It's a good start to April. I was like. Woo Hoo.
sharon,
Deletewrite to your heart's content. we are all just getting started ;) only been here since january. we are young!!
way to kick off april! :D