Blog Manifesto

Blog Manifesto


This blog is dedicated, as the title would suggest, to the qualities of being young. We are young writers. We are playful and sensitive, fluid and changing. We are unashamed with our art. We wonder at the world, puzzle over the meanings of things and twirl in delight at images and ideas that float by, grabbing at them as they pass. We are curious and constantly inquiring and prying concepts open and taking assumptions apart. We are on the ground, close to the earth. We have bare feet and wiggle our toes into nature. We carry our blankies still and wrap up cozy and comfy with each other and tell ghost stories and shiver at creepy things. We laugh and we cry and we take a lot of naps, drained from our outings and exertions.

We write as gifts to each other, tying them up in ribbon and leaving them around for each other to find, hiding and waiting for the person to wake up and read. Surprise! We weave our stories together to create a bond. One writes, then the other. then another again. We have a shared reality that we have crafted, bit by piece by patch, by string. We write simple, honest authentic things, with our unique voices. You can tell each one of us from the other, without knowing who wrote what. Our voices are clear and gentle and original. We whisper and our personalities roar! Like children, our feelings are strong, our passion for what we write shakes us. We are moved and sometimes left breathless, by our own words or the words of each other. We cannonball into each others spaces. We fall backward into each others writing, like into a pile of leaves or a soft bed. We gobble and grin and ask for more. (footnote kudos to JC)

Then we go to bed, wake up to a new day and do it all over again!

Sunday, April 1, 2012

Brush With Death 1


Brush with death-one                                                                             

Christmas when I was twelve brought many nice presents but the BIG ONE was a three speed Schwinn, sleek and shiny, the best present ever! After riding it for a week of vacation, I was more than ready for the first day of school to show it off.  My girlfriend picked me up and we started out on the seven block ride. Her bike was old.  I felt bad for her. She begged to trade bikes just to try it out. After two blocks I switched with her. What a difference!  No smooth ride, no gears to change, it was a rickety ride on a rusty old bike and I said, ‘Let’s switch back at the next corner!’
“Okay”, was the last thing I heard before the chain slipped and I was thrown off balance into the roadway. As the bike and I came to rest on the asphalt I saw the tire of the car pass within four inches of my head. It stopped and I was getting up when the lady got out of the car.  She was very pale, the blood drained from her face in shock. “I thought I’d run over you,” she exclaimed. “Are you all right?”
I managed to stand. “Fine”, I replied. As she left, my friend said, “Oh, yeah, I was going to tell you, the chain is slipping!”
I actually wasn’t fine. As I rode to school on my new bike I noticed drops of blood on the frame.  Then, I realized my knee was bleeding a lot. At school, the nurse bandaged the ground meat that remained on my knee and I went to class.                        
            Around ten o’clock I was surprised to see my mother come to the classroom.  She had come to school to register my brother, Roger, for kindergarten. She wanted to see my knee.  One look at the grayish old hamburger where my knee used to be and off we went.
            At the doctor’s office, after three numbing shots, I spent a half hour behind a drape as the sound of gravel hitting a metal pan rang through the office. I might have been a better patient had they let me see what he was doing.  But, instead, I screamed bloody murder and I still have a bluish dark spot over the location of one rock he didn’t remove.
            The doctor told my mother it was a good thing she brought me then as waiting until the afternoon would have cost me my knee.  So, my little brother saved my knee!

4 comments:

  1. Rocks in the knee, Ouch. Such a little spill and such a close call.

    Keep dodging them, Sharon

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  2. Thanks Rosie...is it okay to the group that I just went ahead and wrote...All my life I have written in my head...usually essays in threes. My best three meals...best vacations, always in threes. Maybe I was writing your 'topics' all that time. In any case, I find myself reviewing my life at this time in it. I usually write for myself but I've enjoyed sharing with you folks....From past months I notice the group writings vary in number. I suppose I will be less inclined to write when it becomes less fascinating. But, I'm loving it now! My only concern is with acceptance from my fellow writers...of course! I don't want to be treading on accepted practices. Please let me know if these don't fit. and I'd love to see more from the others. I could read the older pieces but I feel removed from the immediacy of feedback and the issues have passed for you all. i'M LOOKING FOR GUIDANCE HERE.

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    1. Yes, it is more than okay. It's super. Everyone writes whatever and whenever they feel like it.

      I think the only wrong time to write or comment on writing, is when you don't really want to, but think you have to. Then it becomes a chore, I think.


      It's a good start to April. I was like. Woo Hoo.

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    2. sharon,

      write to your heart's content. we are all just getting started ;) only been here since january. we are young!!

      way to kick off april! :D

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